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To Bounce on a Tangerine by =kitsuneko-xenon:iconkitsuneko-xenon:





Ambling through the black, silky sheen,
I came across a strange beast, bouncing on a tangerine.
"Oh, Beast!" say I, "Oh why are you bouncing on this tangerine?"
"Not I," said the beast, "It's only you bouncing in this scene."
"But," said the man with the talons and quail,
For he had just appeared,
"But why contradict what we so blatantly find
To be no more than a challenge of scale?"
©2008-2009 =kitsuneko-xenon
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Author's Comments

I was looking through my drawer and I found this written on sticky notes... yeah...

The second line breaks the rhythm a little...

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:iconwhimsicalchaos:
This is awesome. I love the play of words. Good stuff.
:iconkitsuneko-xenon:
Thanks!
Nonsensically philosophical poetry (or philosophically nonsensical, maybe?) is my favourite kind of thing to write :nod:

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:iconchihirosen:
Really nice job! ^^ The way you used the words is really interesting, and I enjoyed reading this.

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