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She falls among the riverfolk
Drowning in her tears
She's battered by the raging current
As it steals away her years
This river carved the canyons
All across her arms
Deeper, deeper, ever deeper
But where are the alarms?
No-one tries to help her
All avert their eyes
Not even she attempts a rescue
She's caught until she dies
--
And it was such a sad day
A girl caught in such a bad way
No stitches caught her soul
She fell into a different hole
--
And here a man is screaming
As people pass him by
He shouts until his voice is hoarse
And no-one asks him why
With tremendous urgency
He pleads for just one ear
But all the ears just walk away
Avoiding going near
Within three days, the man is gone
He's not saying his daily prayers
No-one knows where he's gone to
And no-one even cares
--
And it was such a sad day
A man's mind in such a bad way
No people caught his words
His pleadings went unheard
--
Drowning in her tears
She's battered by the raging current
As it steals away her years
This river carved the canyons
All across her arms
Deeper, deeper, ever deeper
But where are the alarms?
No-one tries to help her
All avert their eyes
Not even she attempts a rescue
She's caught until she dies
--
And it was such a sad day
A girl caught in such a bad way
No stitches caught her soul
She fell into a different hole
--
And here a man is screaming
As people pass him by
He shouts until his voice is hoarse
And no-one asks him why
With tremendous urgency
He pleads for just one ear
But all the ears just walk away
Avoiding going near
Within three days, the man is gone
He's not saying his daily prayers
No-one knows where he's gone to
And no-one even cares
--
And it was such a sad day
A man's mind in such a bad way
No people caught his words
His pleadings went unheard
--
I like watching people.
The dashes separate the choruses from the verses.
It's a song, currently being worked on by my band.
The dashes separate the choruses from the verses.
It's a song, currently being worked on by my band.
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Quite clever...
Keeps my interest.
You may have seen some of my song lyrics floating about.
I could help with some additional words, and maybe some edits, and rhymes...(only if you were interested), of course.
Please don't think I am butting in.
I just love to write, is all..
Good luck!!
MD~
Keeps my interest.
You may have seen some of my song lyrics floating about.
I could help with some additional words, and maybe some edits, and rhymes...(only if you were interested), of course.
Please don't think I am butting in.
I just love to write, is all..
Good luck!!
MD~